Writer: Kashif Anwar
Director: Shahzad Kashmiri
Producer: Momina Duraid
Schedule: Every Monday at 8 pm on HUM
This first episode of Neem was actually much more promising than I was expecting it to be. The main female lead Zimal (Mawra Hocane) stood out more than any other character in this first episode. Zimal reminded me of Rohi from Mor Maharan. We need to see progressive female leads in dramas therefore I will be tuning into the next episode for Zimal more than any other character. The promos of the drama suggested that Neem was going to be another love story but after watching this episode, I am certain that the writer had a definite purpose in mind while penning this script. I just hope that he will be able to do justice to all the issues which he is aiming to raise in the drama.
I have been desperately waiting for a meaningful drama that is also entertaining. Most of dramas nowadays are either completely meaningless or are overdramatic. Some of the dramas such as Kuch Ankahi and Mere Ban Jao which started off strong turned into drag fests! There isn’t much worth watching on television at the moment therefore I have decided to watch every new drama that airs and review episodes that I feel are worth talking about.
The Characters and Main Theme
The story of the drama is based in a remote area of Kashmir where there is a huge class divide. Zimal represents hope as she actively wants to be an agent of change whereas Karamat Khan (Syed Jibran) is clearly shown as someone who wants things to stay as they are. These two characters in this first episode came across as black and white. However, this difference in thinking and their personalities was shown convincingly. I hope that we will get to see different layers of these characters as the story moves forward. There were several scenes in this episode that suggested that this would be a story of good vs. evil. It was pretty evident who is on which side after watching this first episode.
Zimal is engaged to Shazil (Arsalan Naseer) that is all the information that was given in this episode regarding these two. Their interaction however was cute; it also showed that Zimal’s relationships were quite different from the suffocating environment in Karamat’s house. Even though Zimal is an orphan, she has a brother who loves her, and baba jaan (Yousuf Bashir Qureshi) has a positive and progressive influence on her. Given the circumstances, it was rather odd that Ashhad (Ameer Gillani) even considered getting married to Zimal.
Teachers as Mentors
The opening scene of this first episode set the tone for what was coming ahead. I loved the parting lecture by Sir Mairaj (Manzar Sehbai). The interaction between Zimal and her teacher went to show how her life and vision changed because of the influence of this one teacher who set out to make a change. In a conversation with baba jaan later on, she also talked about why people should actually be opting for the teaching profession.
Dialogues and Screenplay
The dialogues and screenplay in this first episode were right on point. Right after Zimal uttered “agr kisi ki zindagi ki gaari ko ruka hua dekho tu thora dhaka lga du, shayad start ho jaie aur chal pare” dialogue, the viewers saw Asad (Shamil Khan) helping people out by giving them a ride in his jeep. The positive and negative nature of the characters was depicted intelligently through different scenes. After watching this episode there was no ambiguity regarding the thought process of all these characters. I just hope that the drama does not get too preachy because most of the conversations in this first episode had some meaning or the other. To be honest, after watching so many pointless dramas, I don’t mind the dialogues being preachy either as long as they are engaging. I also liked the use of the local dialectic in some of the scenes.
Final Remarks
I could relate to some of the scenes and scenarios in this episode on a personal level. I absolutely loved the way Kashif Anwar highlighted the true importance of educators in this episode. Those of us who are lucky enough have been blessed with teachers who acted as mentors and opened new avenues for us. Sometimes these teachers underestimate their own powers as an agent of change. This is especially relevant nowadays when education is fast turning into a business.
There were some scenes in which I felt there were continuity issues and the transition from one scene to the other was not too smooth. Overall, however, just like always Shahzad Kashmiri’s amazing direction did not fail to impress. He captured the beauty of the locations in the best manner possible. The television scene was well shot but it was rather strange to see that tiny television in such an affluent household. Zimal’s outfit when she was leaving for Lahore and her overall look was slightly outdated considering her background and overall personality. Also, I couldn’t help but wonder why
Mawra Hocane owned her character in this first episode. Her performance was both effortless and engaging. She made Zimal’s character extremely likable. Syed Jibran nails every character he plays and this is the kind of character he has played before as well. However, he has a definite screen presence and I liked his overall look for the role. He was convincing as the uncouth and entitled man who thinks he owns the world. It is also good to see Ameer Gillani experimenting even though he could easily have settled down for another typical role but he chose to do something different. His performance and outlook both were impressive for the most part. The actor playing Jamil’s role also played his part well. Yousuf Bashir Qureshi is such a pleasant addition to the drama industry. He is well-suited for the role he is playing in Neem. Shamil Khan’s character and his performance both were another likable aspect.
This first episode definitely had a lot going for it. The casting, writing, and direction for the most part were impressive. Did you watch it? Do share your views.
Good to see you here after a long time Fatima!
I agree, there is nothing good to watch at TV right now and honestly not starting Neem yet, because of the traumatic experience that Sabaat turned out to be, however very much looking forward to Jhok Sarkaar.
PS: I have really started to enjoy Yunhi. Are you watching it? If yes, would love to hear your thoughts on it!
The feeling is mutual Pakistani Po. How are you doing?
I hear ya loud and clear, totally get what you mean, old wounds.
Please watch it, kuch weeks hi sahi, enjoy kr lein ;) It was soooooo good.
I need to watch Yunhi now since two of my favorite people (you and Ketan) recommended it :)
Just watched Jhok Sarkar and reviewed it. Will look forward to your feedback.
Fatima Ji,
Oh! My Gosh!!!
The last review from you was in mid March 2023. Welcome back.
Sincerely hope you have had a very good break… could do a world of good to you for sure…
It would have helped if you had reviewed Yunhi…. anyway it’s okay…
Moving away from the absurdities of
Tere Bin and Mujhe Pyaar Hua Tha…
The dramas coming soon on Green Entertainment look promising…
Are you planning to watch them…
Please keep all of us posted on your review plans….
Welcome again…..it’s more like Happy New Year….in some sort of a way….
Looking forward to your review on Neem.
Thank You and Regards,
Ketan
Hello Ketan, so good to hear from you once again.
Yes, I was going through a lot in my personal life for the past few months and recently lost my dearest mother, therefore, this is definitely another beginning for me in so many ways. Wish me luck please.
Readers like you are the reason why I started writing again otherwise Pakistani dramas are difficult to sit through nowadays. Thankfully Neem’s first episode was a great way to start :) As someone who has been reviewing dramas for over a decade, newness in the content and its appeal can be the only constant factor. Otherwise, after all these years, you don’t even want to criticize things you have literally been calling out for years since not much changes but then we should keep on trying.
Oh yes! Green Entertainment dramas look amazing. We really need such dramas on television right now otherwise the toxicity and the lack of entertainment in dramas nowadays will drive the audience farther away.
Will tune into Yunhu right away :)
Thank you so much for the warm welcome, it means the world to me.
Looking forward to our interactions on different drama threads :)
Saddened to hear about your loss. Allah Taa’la unke darjaat buland farmaye. Aameen.
Be strong, your mother is always with you emotionally and spiritually.
Ameen.
Thank you so much Waqar for your kind words and duas. I agree, they are.
Fatima Ji,
Sorry to hear about the loss.
May your mother’s soul rest in peace.
May the almighty always bring you luck your way.
Regards,
Ketan
Ameen.
Thank you so much Ketan for your concern, love and prayers.
Sorry for your loss….May she rest in peace!
May God give you and your family all the strength to bounce back.
Ameen.
Thank you so much Sheetal. Please keep us in your duas.
Nice to see ur review Fatima, I was expecting it.. need is after all directed by shehzaad kashmir who according to me is the best director. All the actors performed v well…..mawra is in her comfort zone..such roles suit her, syed jibran always looks v convincing as a villain and ameer surprised with his performance agn in a difficult role..really looking forward to it
Nice to see your comment here as well Tiger. It’s been a long time since you commented. Yes, absolutely right, totally agree with you about Neem. Mawra was amazing. Syed Jibran is such an underrated actor, loved all his performances recently. Me too, this, I think was an amazing first episode. I will look forward to your feedback :)